Saturday 16th

Instead of saying 'Using soro's purse is strange, and takes me back in time, ( to a place where glances were swift and looks so long and we had to pretend, pretend)' Should i instead be saying 'The way the leather feels to touch and how my money rests in its creases causes my brain to linger where it used to be. - Where hands felt too loose in the day, nothing to touch, and too tight in the evening, so much to hold in so little time.'?